i love your poetry. It reads almost soulful, like blues or jazz. Like a Beat from the west

The Sinnerman character in this was really great. I loved that idea. There was some really beautiful poetry in this. Write on!

Holy shit. I don't even know what to say. This is fantastic. It's so different from what I normally see, and I love that. It reminds me of Nick Cave, for some reason. I think it might just be the Sinnerman thing; reminds me of Grinderman. Anyway. That's relatively off-topic. I just can't even comprehend anything to say besides that I love this and every word of it is perfect and it's going on my favorites. Beautiful work. Keep writing! :)

I really liked the diction in the poem--keep up the good writing!