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| Amindaya 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseAw. That was a lovely ending. His bruises disappeared. :) |
| Ocean's pebble 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is so awesome. Good plotline, nice writing, and no errors! Yay! I really liked it. |
| Mistress of Apple Pie 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseThis story is so adorable. I like how simple it was and I think it's absolutely amazing. I was attracted to this story when I read the summary with the word 'hobo' in it. Literally. I didn't have a very great experience with a hobo before...he was trying to hit on me and I ran, screaming like a chicken without its head. From someone else's point of view, they might have thought I was the crazy one. =) once again, amazing! |
| Iris Jones 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseo this was so good the ending "confession" bit as i like to call it where steve admits his feelings went a little to fast but all in all i thought it was wonderful good job |
| Jenny Hatter 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely adorable. I love the story. Although, I have yet to seen a hobo at Phuoc Loc Tho in the past... oh, a couple of years I've gone to the mall. Hahahaha. I shall keep a look-out for a strange-looking hobo the next time I go. Mwa ha ha ha. Jk jk. I've also noticed your characters' last names in many of your stories. Very clever. He he he. Hope you come up with a new story soon! |
| Kailum 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was very touching. I liked it a lot ^^ |
| Imagined Insanity 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseawesome. i love that Clara is kind of watching over them. though i admit, the bruises had me going 'om my god he has leukemia' for awhile. i am happy that i was wrong. great job. |
| KnittingKneedle 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseThis review is brought to you by the review marathon (link is on my profile) 7,0 words is a beast of a story- your not doing me any favours for the review marathon where I have to review as many stories as possible- but I couldn't help myself this turned out so much better than I was expecting. The dialogue you have struck me as some of the most realistic I had seen, I can really relate to the boys and they seem almost like 'real people'. I think there were some scenes that could have been cut or reduced- just to keep people reading, or perhaps it could have been cut down into two parts. The end was amazing, so was the song- I love the closure that you gave everyone, great job! |
| magalina 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuse:_: Loved it, for a moment I thought Steve was going to die. I love happy endings :) Lovely as always! |
| Back of Beyond 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseNice story and characters, shame there's no more to read! :] |
| Merks 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI love it. |