cuute
angsty, but cute. the bruises was a nice little symbol

THIS IS SO CUTE AND JUST SO! :) GREAT JOB :D

Very nice :) I love characters like Steve: quiet, seemingly dispassionate, etc. He seemed very real and self-aware, though not unrealistically so. Of course Tony was great too, and his struggle (is that too strong of a word?) with letting go of Clara was very touching, even when seen from an outside perspective. I was a little surprised about how his mother reacted when she found out, though I guess there was some foreshadowing to her unforgiving nature before that, now that I think about it. Also, the bruises thing was a little weird, but it made for a great song :)

AWE!
I adore this story!Kudos!

Ah so these are the same Steve and Tony as in the other story(with Henry and the name less guy who isn't jealous of either of them). And Danny's the guy who loved music more than his boyfriend.

this was really good! i liked it alot!...im still wondering what the cause of the bruises were though...

Wait, wait. Why was he bruised? Was his mom just crazy and delusional? Was he into self harm? Was he a reincarnation of whatserface?

I love your story! It is absolutely amazing, and honestly I read it twice the first day I found it. Which to tell the truth was yesterday but it's such an amazing story I just felt I had to review. I absolutely love Steve and Tony. You're a very talented writer and I hope you keep up the good work.


~jaded

Aw. I keep reading really cute stories today.. Yours is like the fifth one that I've read. Super cute.

I loved it.

I'm tired but that doesn't cloud my judgment. Because I loved it.

Beautiful.

-bursts out in happy tears-

I think that is so sweet!

However I am forever pissed at Steve's mom, I mean the one thing he asks for she doesn't accept.


FAVS!

Great story, I loved every bit of it ! It is beautifully written, and the ending is very sweet.

Oh, and particularly liked the moment when Tony sings for Steve. I found it very moving.

I thought this was really good. I liked how Steve's mom's reaction was believable. I hate it when the mom's always smile and say "If it makes you happy". Anywho, simply spiffy!

Oh, that was so good! I like the Vietnamese setting, and I really had a scare there when Tony flipped out about Steve's bruises- I kept thinking maybe Clara had had something like them. I love the fact that Tony is able to move on with Steve, and I like how he always came back smelling like camellias.

beautiful...just beautiful. I love that's it's set in the Vietnamese community, it's refreshingly different. So original. I love it. Thank you. It was a privilege to read.