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Reviews For: Nothin but a xxx scene

Bingster
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting start! I'd like to read more.
Verseprose
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abuseYes I would like to see what happen and if you would continue the story, I would be interested to read more.
Angel of Avarice
2008-02-29
ch 1,
abuseSorry I sent that message too soon by accident, but I like your story. I didn't get to tell you that I can't wait to help with the next chapter. The next message will have the rest of my input but for now we wait. Dun dun dun. . .
The Love Love Queen
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseWell it's kind of alright for a PWP. You might want to go have a beta reader take a look at this though. The dialouge should not be lumped together in one paragraph.
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