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| Bingster 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting start! I'd like to read more. |
| Verseprose 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseYes I would like to see what happen and if you would continue the story, I would be interested to read more. |
| Angel of Avarice 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseSorry I sent that message too soon by accident, but I like your story. I didn't get to tell you that I can't wait to help with the next chapter. The next message will have the rest of my input but for now we wait. Dun dun dun. . . |
| The Love Love Queen 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWell it's kind of alright for a PWP. You might want to go have a beta reader take a look at this though. The dialouge should not be lumped together in one paragraph. |