| Reviews for Nothin but a xxx scene |
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banana-guts 3/20/08 . chapter 1Very interesting start! I'd like to read more. |
Verseprose 3/8/08 . chapter 1Yes I would like to see what happen and if you would continue the story, I would be interested to read more. |
SiD EliA 2/29/08 . chapter 1Sorry I sent that message too soon by accident, but I like your story. I didn't get to tell you that I can't wait to help with the next chapter. The next message will have the rest of my input but for now we wait. Dun dun dun. . . |
The Love Love Queen 2/27/08 . chapter 1Well it's kind of alright for a PWP. You might want to go have a beta reader take a look at this though. The dialouge should not be lumped together in one paragraph. |