 Near Dark 2008-02-27 . chapter 1This is quite possibly the best thing I've read today. It was very clever - it hardly seemed like you had to struggle to fit what you had to say into the letters, which is usually the case with acrostic poems.
The reference to the actual St. Valentine did it for me. There are a few small typos, though - but I'm picky like that. All in all, great job. |