Nice very interesting story. I will be intersted to see her next motivation and how Rainon plays into the story if he even does. And what happened to Marek.I will definitely keep reading this very well written story. Would you please review my story Amazon, i would like tips from such a good author.

Three years...what an obsession.

What's with the two boxes in the middle of the chapter? FP formatting funny?

I see you took some things I said previously into consideration. I appreciate the removal of the dumpster. ;)

However, the two of them fighting for hours still doesn't ring true to me. You have to keep in mind how much stamina the two characters have, especially in accordance to their ages. I don't think a thirteen year old girl is going to be able to keep up with-much less beat-a fifteen year old boy. He's stronger, probably taller, and is likely to have more experience. But that's my only gripe about the story.

ahh, I liked Tristan, ah well, that happens to me in every story I read so I shall live. Hmm, this is very interesting plot movement...I have a theory about what /might/ happened but I am not yet ready to reveal it so yeah, I shall wait for your next update, so please update soon!

that is interesting. i like it and i hope you keep going

interesting, interesting. one mystery solved and now many are revealed...that's the signs of a great story and a very unpredictable one at that. please, please, update soon!

niiccee, that had alot of mystery to it. i love it, you've got to update soon, kay.