 Ren Z. 2008-02-28 . chapter 2 Hey! I'm not skinny as a rail. Thanks for writing me as a guy, btw... I can't see Maru being so naggy and stuff, especially at the very beginning, when the guards are talking about the girl in Diacayar. And wouldn't it seem strange for the guard to see "a girl" in boy's clothes? Probably dirty ratty clothes too. You're playing up the Bakanishi thing a bit too much, imo. And Kame sounds really bitchy...
haha, but its a good read. Btw, prologue was pretty awesome. I've read it a few times over already. Are you going to put Maru's beatboxing in there? or Akanishi's girly scream? That would be funny. Oh, and don't forget the awesome acrobatics. Man, I wish this could actually be filmed. I would pay fifty bucks to watch it. And I approve of either Ueda or Hyde being Sydney. |
 Gaillen's Mirror 2008-02-27 . chapter 1 Sounds interesting.
OMG! You're a fan of KAT-TUN! I was actually browsing through some of my KAT-TUN pictures when I paused to read this!
Kind of funny, ne? (Ueda Tatsuya Fan!)
Can't wait to read this now that I have a nice mental picture to go along with it.
^_^;; I have an account under the same name, I'm just too lazy to sign in. |