Beautiful work here Hidden. It's lovely and well crafted. You always have solid work, and very seldom do I see any noticeable or significant problems.

My constructive criticism is that I believe you should keep challenging yourself as an artist. It's hard, because it means each poem is more than just an expression of self and words, it also is a step forward in some way. Please try writing more pieces like this, that have challenging subject matter or pieces that challenge you to revamp your writing style. Try experimenting with new literary devices, maybe even try writing a sonnet every now and then perhaps.

Keep pushing yourself my friend, I enjoy reading your work, but even more I enjoy seeing you grow!

Cute!