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| Amarant Rose Coral 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abusereally good poem when you know the background of it. I liked the ending.:). |
| Ronin Rabbit 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseThe beginning sounds a little awkward but it expresses the emotion much better near the end. Especially knowing the backstory of this poem, it makes it feel powerful. |