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| Summer Frost 2008-09-08 ch 1,  | abuseI liked your theme but you should have used a wider variety of words. Rhyming a word with itself is ... anyway it was about 2.1 stars out of 5 |
| The13thReason 2008-08-14 ch 1, | abuseAw, i luv it! |
| Starry-Eyess-X 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, groovy poem! I loved this, the emotion was very strong... you rock! X = D |
| Tortue 2008-07-13 ch 1, | abusegosh you are good man =p i like the part " my heart isnt whole, its missing a piece but its alright that one you can keep" so sweet^^ |
| Love.Slowly.Kills 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseOMG! This poem is exactly like mine, THREE SIMPLE WORDS, except longer and with a better vocbulary! Please check mine out and review! Love you much. |
| kloun mannequin 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseit's brokenheart, I like this part: I loved him But I was too blind to see The memories are just killing me I wish I could die |
| Crysta Mayville 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseWow that was really sad, but also really good. |
| ReggieRay 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat expression and just like many others, their are days where we wish we could go back and change. I truly hope this poem inspired you to do something when ever their is an opportunity. |