wow! emotional it is..

I like your use of repetition, imagery, and rhyme. However the last stanza is a little weak, I feel. By until this day, you're suggesting that today, you stopped loving him. If so, why? Are you moving on?
On the whole though, nice work! :)

WOW that honestly scared me because I have been worried somthing like that was going to happen to me...but it was really well wrighten and deep ... ... pulls at your heartstrings

PS you will probably understand most of what I just said when you read my poems

PPS ON A LIGHTER NOTE even though I just said it I don't only read poems I wright them ... wait ... uh... I have...23 poems and three epic novels :) : )

I liked your theme but you should have used a wider variety of words. Rhyming a word with itself is ... anyway it was about 2.1 stars out of 5

Aw, i luv it!

Wow, groovy poem! I loved this, the emotion was very strong... you rock!

X = D

gosh you are good man =p
i like the part " my heart isnt whole, its missing a piece but its alright that one you can keep"
so sweet^^

OMG! This poem is exactly like mine, THREE SIMPLE WORDS, except longer and with a better vocbulary! Please check mine out and review!
Love you much.

it's brokenheart, I like this part:

I loved him

But I was too blind to see

The memories are just killing me

I wish I could die

Wow that was really sad, but also really good.

Great expression and just like many others, their are days where we wish we could go back and change. I truly hope this poem inspired you to do something when ever their is an opportunity.