This is great writing and thank you so much for what you said about my story because what you said is probobly true, he would be proud of my story :)

I'm not sure what I think about this poem.
It seems like you took a cliché topic, and used words that made it less cliché.

Eh, if you can do it, more power to you.
You do write well.

Beautiful imagery.

Woah...

Okay, I swear this really spoke to me! I like the structure you have for your poems, but I liked this one in particular.

Awesome job, love it.

Kaiyako K.

wow! =^^= this is really deep! I like how you separated versus with the lines in Italics. and it's very dark... I like dark poetry ^^;

Dude, you just flat out rock. I have to confess, I read all your stuff on here...I don't really know why I'm reviewing this one, I'd like to review them all but I'm at work, so I can't stay on here too long. Anywho, yeah, WOW, I love your poems, they're so deep and intense...sometimes i think mine can be understood by a five year old.:-P
Ok, seriously I'm not normally like this, all stalkerish-like (is that even a word?) but I love the poem on ur profile! Woot! Japanese music soo ROCKS! lol. Sorry, had a moment.
Anywho, seriously, thanks for the review. You have no idea how encouraging that was for me. To be honest, I've been really lazy about putting stuff up here...I got like five or six (maybe more) that I've written in the past six months or so that are still on my comp...
...and I'm thinking I'd better go, cause this has definitely turned from a "review" to a "hi, how are you, I like you, lets be friends on

OMG OMG OMG you're BACK! *Squeals* lol.

How are you? I'm great! and omg I'm writing a new poem!! Already written 21 lines, lol.

I heart this poem! Oh yup and I totally understand the title - I'm completely relating to that right now. Fantastic job. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

yay u fixed it! now i can review...


even tough u already know wot i think of this one =)

but gotta share the luv x

Another great poem! I really like the way you compare a person with rain and how you add other elements of weather too. You really have to write some more. -x-