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| shootingstar89 2008-04-24 ch 4,  | abusewow...just wow. you outdid yourself with this chapter. it is very wellwritten...although i have to admit i too was surprised to find out that isis is a smoker. how old is she anyways? you left quite a cliffhanger though and i can't wait for the next update! hopefully it will come sooner rather than later? :) |
| shootingstar89 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abusei am loving this story...i'm so excited for isis and am glad she is making that first move to independence. please update really soon...i want to hear about the try outs! |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-03-21 ch 3, | abuseI don't like Amanda. But this is really cute anyways. I hope you update soon! |
| shootingstar89 2008-03-06 ch 2, | abuseyou are a very talented writer and you really sucked me in as the reader from the very beginning. good job! not a lot of stories do that. If you think this is boring, i'm excited to what else you can do. please continue updating. i love it. |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-03-05 ch 2, | abuseNice chapter. Yeah, it was a bit tedious to get through, but good none the less. When you change POVs, you should really say so, like Raleigh's POV or Isis' POV. Cause I was uber confused. And I thought it was funny that you picked Beauty and the Beast, because my school is doing that and they're showing it this weekend. Well, I hope you update soon! |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. So I'm assuming that this is the end of the story, and you'll tell us how they got together and everything, right? And I kind of like how it's sad. Happy endings are good too, though. Please update soon! |