Reviews for bare & blank on the concrete

Faith Adeline 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abusewow, this is such a strong piece. I really enjoyed it! Faith
brookeblue 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abuseThat was interesting-- Very good beat. I only think that you put this under the wrong category of fiction when I think it should be under poetry. Nonetheless, well written. A bit depressing. But well written. Could be lyrics, if you gave it a shot.