 Caught In A Simple Game 2008-03-01 . chapter 2It was very difficult to tear my eyes away from this story. I love the emotion you've portrayed, and the alternating perspectives. It really felt like I was getting into the characters' heads. I also like that while there is a high school sweetheart storyline, the events aren't set IN high school; seems like that is most of what I find to read on here. Props on a work well done, and looking forward to the next installment. |