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| Mademoiselle Rouge 2008-05-13 ch 7,  | abuseI really like this story ! (Dunno why, but i'm really fond of stories happening in the 19th and early 20th centuries). Will and Theodore are really cute together, I love them. Hope to read more soon ! |
| Feel The Waltz 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseHey, i like the sound of this so far. its pretty sound but on the line "Is something wrong, James?" she asked " you've missed out changing his name. Thought i'd point this out before i moved onto the next chapter. :) |
| Tiffery 2008-05-12 ch 7, anon. | abuseYeah. So...I've already sent a review, but still. |
| Amy 2008-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just wanted to say that I am really enjoying this story so far. I am a fan of your HP fanfiction and am glad to see original fiction. I have a funny feeling that this not going to end as a happy ending, but I look forward to the journey anyway. Thank you and best wishes. |
| timshel in a vintage dress 2008-03-03 ch 3, | abuseYes yes. Quite good so far. One thing I was thoroughly confused about: when he came home for the first time (when he found his mother had arrived), did he have two dinner jackets? I could be wrong, but it seemed like he hung it up on a peg, and then he shrugged it off in his room. Dunno. Elizabeth sounds so nice. I hope, in the end, he does "release" her. Peace & Love ~> Hp |
| kel 2008-03-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm totally not done yet but i really liked the dialog, it's well done. :) |
| the heart of the sea 2008-03-01 ch 2, | abuseAnother chapter well-written. can't wait to read more. |
| timshel in a vintage dress 2008-02-29 ch 2, | abuseHm...I liked this. At first, I thought it was a bit rushed, but I think it's growing on me. Can't wait to see what happens next. Peace & Love ~> Hp |
| Ivory 2008-02-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, so good. PLEASE continue, for me! ;) |
| the heart of the sea 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abusewonderfull beginning, can't wait to read more. |
| Marci018 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseOriginal fic! Original fic! *dances* Yay! This was lovely! I can't wait to see where you go with this!! Btw, I noticed a small error. During the beach scene, you wrote "I was James AUSTIN" Did you mean Hughes?? |