Wow,

that's all i can say, for a lack of more eloquent words,
it was beautiful, i only hope that you could one day publish this just so i can read it again and again without use of my laptop,

Obsidian~

I really like this story ! (Dunno why, but i'm really fond of stories happening in the 19th and early 20th centuries).
Will and Theodore are really cute together, I love them.
Hope to read more soon !

Hey, i like the sound of this so far. its pretty sound but on the line "Is something wrong, James?" she asked " you've missed out changing his name. Thought i'd point this out before i moved onto the next chapter. :)

Yeah. So...I've already sent a review, but still.

I just wanted to say that I am really enjoying this story so far. I am a fan of your HP fanfiction and am glad to see original fiction. I have a funny feeling that this not going to end as a happy ending, but I look forward to the journey anyway. Thank you and best wishes.

Yes yes. Quite good so far. One thing I was thoroughly confused about: when he came home for the first time (when he found his mother had arrived), did he have two dinner jackets? I could be wrong, but it seemed like he hung it up on a peg, and then he shrugged it off in his room. Dunno. Elizabeth sounds so nice. I hope, in the end, he does "release" her.

Peace & Love

~> Hp

I'm totally not done yet but i really liked the dialog, it's well done. :)

Another chapter well-written. can't wait to read more.

Hm...I liked this. At first, I thought it was a bit rushed, but I think it's growing on me. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Peace & Love

~> Hp

Oh, so good. PLEASE continue, for me! ;)

wonderfull beginning, can't wait to read more.

Original fic! Original fic! *dances* Yay! This was lovely! I can't wait to see where you go with this!!

Btw, I noticed a small error. During the beach scene, you wrote "I was James AUSTIN" Did you mean Hughes??