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| Aslan Israel 2008-02-27 ch 1,  | abuseYou have some pretty fantastic imagery going on here, I'm really impressed. 'a simple four-legged chair with splinters and swirling knots like galaxies' 'scented like linen and cloves and clothed in draped fabrics, blood-stained in poetry' This is just a beautiful piece, pure and simple. And the thoughts expressed seem to be all of humanity's questions. |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseInteresting topic... VERY interesting topic... very intriguing. I loved how you thought about it so... so... honestly... do you know what I'm trying to say? My only thing- captalize the word 'I'. Haha, sorry. Big pet peev of mine. Great job- WxOxW |