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Reviews For: My Deepest Regret

electric feel
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abusei'm sure they're thankful for how you put it

by not telling the story completely chronologically, you added to the emotion
TamoraGregory916
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abusereally beautiful...you've done a great job of making such a tough, sticky situation look great on paper

really great stuff!!
XxSacrificialXDemisexX
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseYes, it's sad. But it happens all the time. It's hard admitting that you're gay--my mom said she didn't have to accept it, so I switched and told her I was bi. She was OK with that... As long as there's still grandbabies, huh?

No. This was very well written. I was anticipating the moment he told his father, then you threw in a twist.
Dandelion Cupcakes
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abusethat's really sad and i think it's terrible that people ca react that badly to people being gay too
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