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| electric feel 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusei'm sure they're thankful for how you put it by not telling the story completely chronologically, you added to the emotion |
| TamoraGregory916 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusereally beautiful...you've done a great job of making such a tough, sticky situation look great on paper really great stuff!! |
| XxSacrificialXDemisexX 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseYes, it's sad. But it happens all the time. It's hard admitting that you're gay--my mom said she didn't have to accept it, so I switched and told her I was bi. She was OK with that... As long as there's still grandbabies, huh? No. This was very well written. I was anticipating the moment he told his father, then you threw in a twist. |
| Dandelion Cupcakes 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abusethat's really sad and i think it's terrible that people ca react that badly to people being gay too |