 peytona05 2009-01-04 . chapter 1This is a pretty good story. Not to say that I'm in favor of homosexuality (because I'm not), but the way you portray the main character is, I'm sure, very realistic, and causes the reader to feel sympathy and compassion towards him. Well done. |
 metatextual 2008-03-28 . chapter 1i'm sure they're thankful for how you put it
by not telling the story completely chronologically, you added to the emotion |
 TamoraGregory916 2008-03-08 . chapter 1really beautiful...you've done a great job of making such a tough, sticky situation look great on paper
really great stuff!! |
 xXx.Anomaly.xXx 2008-02-28 . chapter 1Yes, it's sad. But it happens all the time. It's hard admitting that you're gay--my mom said she didn't have to accept it, so I switched and told her I was bi. She was OK with that... As long as there's still grandbabies, huh?
No. This was very well written. I was anticipating the moment he told his father, then you threw in a twist. |
 Dandelion Cupcakes 2008-02-28 . chapter 1that's really sad and i think it's terrible that people ca react that badly to people being gay too |