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| Asherah Seirei 2008-04-05 ch 1,  | abuseI like your style--jagged, but it flows really well. And I like the idea and overall theme of it. It reminded me of a fracture from a song. ^^ |
| -Truly-Verily-Purely-Me- 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really like the ryhming scheme in this one. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea of this and it flows really well.. the only thing is the rhyming scheme confused me a bit, but other than that really awesome piece |
| Timeless Asuka 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseAnother wonderful poem. Your really an excellent writer, you know. Anyway, December has to be my favourite month. "I dry my tears to remember/The cold months of december" Favourite lines. So amazing. ~~ AmarokUchiha ~~ |
| HelpWanted11 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseShort but sweet and so powerful. This poem is amazing. You're an awesome writer. I really likethe rhythymic quality of this piece. I love it. Keep writing, HelpWanted11 |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseLet me know if there are any spelling errors or if something needs to be fixed on the poem. I would love to have your feedback. I don't think it is that great of a poem, but I just wanted to post it. I have not been to this site for awhile, so I wanna say, "I love you all and I wish you the best." Thanks so much. XOXO TSP |