SEMMU
2008-03-30
ch 1,  | abuseI like your use of iambic lines and your ending with the couplet. Also, your word choices are very powerful and you do an excellent job of describing your environment. Although I hate anything associated with winter (I don't know if you've read my poem on winter) I enjoyed the sense of serenity your poem gave me. It actually reminds me of summer when I wake up before daylight and feel as if I'm the only one on Earth. For a moment, I enjoy being completely alone and comfortable. |
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