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| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseYou're brilliant with imagery. I think I've said that about 52.7 times already, but whatever. You always write such sad stories, but it's a nice break from all the 'happily ever after' ones on this site. |
| FellowMan 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this, I loved your style, and sprite spillage of oxymorons, "his nonchalance goes into overdrive" luvd it :) |
| Iris Early 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abusebeautiful - just beautiful. darling. 'the flame in his heart burns hot in his chest' |