Nice to see the update was well worth it! A few minor grammatical errors, but nothing major. Looking forward for the face to face meeting between Centurion and "Mars."

Very good chapter, as always. It was great to see Centurion cut loose and do work on those tanks. Spearing the chopper may have been the best part next to the ferris wheel and the heart attack that followed. It was also nice to see Stiletto was a little bit human after all, and likes chili fries. Great story, like all of all your. It's progressing rather nicely.

Nice to see some plot twists and some well-written action scenes. The characters are all pretty cool. The Dr. Strange expy, the Sleuth, and Centurion are all pretty cool. Sadly, this story hasn't been updated for while. I hope you continue this!

I have to say, this is a pretty awesome superhero offering. The premise seemed like a bit of escapism at first, but got cooler real quick. The analogs of people he knows between realities is also a fun twist.

Awesome chapter. It had everything I expected from this story, action, intrigue, and et cetera. It was very nice to see the developement of all the characters as they reacted to their different situations. Centurion handling the Vulcans, Sleuth torturing Raven, Morning Star and Stiletto bickering/one-sided flirting, and Inferno's incredible display of power. That bit between Les and Von Erik was very nicely done and seeing the hero cut loose was surprising. I can't wait to see where the team goes from here. That's assuming they can get off the island in one piece.

I've got to check my email a bit more often I had no idea there was a new chapter until about twelve days later. Very good chapter though, the island seems pretty brutal what with its collosal spiders and Sasquatch wannabes.

I also like the new characters like Les and Stiletto. I really appreciated the bit where the cybernetic assassin has to sing her little daughter to sleep, really cool. And Calloway's powers seem very interesting so far, can't wait to see how he uses those in the future.

And finally, the part at the end with Daniel's personal conflict about shooting the guard was also pretty cool, especially with the Sleuth watching him. Those bits of suspicion and doubt are always interesting. So thanks for writign and I can't wait for more.

Well that was a good, long wait. XD But at least it was well worth it, very good chapter as always. Though I was hoping to see the other new members of the team I guess I can wait for the next chapter. Hope to see more soon.

This is an excellent read. Your prose is great. Keep going, keep going, keep going.

Excellent story so far, well written and full of interesting characters as usual. Can't wait to see more.

Damn. That was intense. And there wasn't even any fighting!

This is such a great story. I love the characters, and the premise is so refreshing and interesting. I'd like to thank you for being so dedicated; you write such huge chapters! And the bit with Anthony was so sweet that I smiled the whole time I read it. That's the mark of a good writer. :D

Yeah. You rock.

Great stuff here mate!

I've rarely seen super heroes so well written outside of their natural medium.

You know a story is good when you actually start talking to the character to fight, this is one of them. When Phobos was ready to clubber Kirby I almost shouted "come on get up defend yourself don't give in." So for that part for catching my attention nice job. Since Sleuth is kind of like Batman, I'm guessing you're taking the play on how the oldschool Adam West Batman was considered gay, that's one of my theories. I can't wait for chapter 6 now to know the situation

I just realize how this story plays out like; Wanted mix with a better LXG, given the heroes flaws and making them human was a great idea.
I like the part when Kirby suspects Reeves and Carol details him on the work he's done, that was funny.
Hope you continue soon

S.J.Olusanya

As usual, the bureaucratic rival is a real villain, not just an office opponent. Still, all of this is working out quite well. And just who is the mysterious note-taker, I wonder?

This is a great idea for this story, a man living his dreams I can't wait to see more of it, as I'm about to finish mine soon enough.