unusual. But I like it. Great job.

XKristie MarieX

you gaze on me/and you gaze on me... usually you gaze at someone not on them

I play fool if I want to push the world aside... play the fool

that's make you great... that

I close the eyes if I'm scared... my

I shout if I want to be listened... listened to

"I'm the sadness disguised as joy" loved that line.. the piece was really interesting... the idea of looking at people and the way you describe who you are is really great