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| Star the Foxhound 2008-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseGood review. It wasn't the best poem ever, but I liked it. I would work alittle more on the structure, but poems don't have specific rules. Nice Job! |
| Nastrond 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty good, but a little unfocused. It could be longer and more specific in several spots, it feels kind of incomplete, Those are just personal things.It is poetry, however, so there are no specific rules except to have fun with it and this poem looks very fun. Like something I'd read to my little cousin. |