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Reviews For: The Player

Crystal Leigh 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseVery unique! Although the content is slightly shocking, it's written wonderfully. The sentence structures are beautiful and it flows very well! Nice job.
Le Meg 2008-03-05 ch 1,	abuseYeah, I didn't see the necrophilia part coming, but I think that's what made this awesome, in a shocking kind of way. It's so well articulated that it almost makes it seem like sexing up dead people is okay; funny how eloquence can do that. Keyword being "almost", heh. Also, this reminds me of a music video... I think it was Tom Petty.
Aithein Rosen 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abuseI think its really cool! It appeals to every single sensually sexual part of my body. XD Kudos to your good work!
Elkica 2008-03-03 ch 1,	abuseNice work and very interesting angle. It was like a seeing nicely wrapped gift and then when I opened it, there was something nasty in it. Not bad. Just nasty and because of the wrap also special. Does it make any sense?
Sixkiller 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseHow is it I don't see these things coming by now?! lol Very nicely written ~ You write shocking and contraversial things so well!
Enigmatic Margaret 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseI was repulsed by the concept of it. However at the same time I was taken competely unaware. That's the best bit I guess. It was easy to read and the punch was easy to come by. However here are just a few things that you migh consider revising. I reckon these sentence could be better placed and the first one split into two separate sentences. And the last two merged. -It’s the companionship, if even for that short time, and it’s the excitement, and perhaps danger. It’s the unknown. Really, that must be the most enticing part.- to It is the companionship, if even for a short period of time. It is the excitement, and perhaps the danger. It is the unknown, really, this must be the most enticing part. Haha.. it's also illegal too. Great piece.

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