Wow, I really love your story. I'm a big sucker for the whole tortured, rake, bad boy thing and Dane is pretty alluring. Plus, I really like the whole time period, even if you have to overlook the poor hygiene and only being able to wear a dress. And you definitely do it justice.

Great story, i've just read it from start and i can't wait to see where you take this characters!

Great to see the update - love the way you have carefully built this story!

This story is just always so exciting! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)

Oh another twist! This was a fascinating chapter! :)

If Sabrina was 23 when her husband died, she wouldn't be 22 (3 years older than a 19 year old) the following year.

Let's see, what do I have to say for Chaptre Un? Well, first of all, OMG! When she pointed out the stain, I blushed FOR Peter. I was just thinkng, "Oh GROS!" It's kind of one of those things we girls know that guys do, but want to pretend don't exist. And I have to wonder, why was Peter that close to stain the magazine, anyway? I mean, I GUESS if he was really talented, he could be sitting there in front of it and, uh, spew all over the place, but...Anyway...Maybe I should just not think down the road lol.

In spite of the perverted thoughts that I would prefer not to think about it, I loved it! After all, I've written worse, just not in this fandom xD Off to review the second chapter to get that review meter of yours up!

This is a really interesting story; I actually just read all 22 chapters! It's a bit addicting. :)

YAY! Yet another fantastic chapter! I love how you portray Malik and Isis.

OK- Bit lost here. Who is Malik, Isis, Anzu...etc. Either the names got mixed up or I missed (or forgot)something and some characters.

Wonderful chapter, I hope you update soon! Can't wait to know what's up with Casper...^.^

OMG--! Is Casper the hired killer?!

Is Casper plotting something here?!

Hey--I wonder if you named Casper...well 'casper' because of its hidden symbolism? Great ch. though.

OMG--Nicolas is such an as*! I can't stand him by now--and it's only ch.3! Dang--this story is getting good though!