This is quite interesting keep it up?

OMG this is amzaing!

Hmm...

You have a wonderful idea in mind... after all, who doesn't love superpowered teens?

But, you could do with some proofreading... there were some spelling errors. And also, for some advice, I must say: try not to introduce all your characters at once. Take time with your story: develop it. Think thoroughly about what you want to do, about your characters, about your plot and relationships between characters.

Otherwise, though, I do very much love the idea.

I agree, very lame. Use descriptions. Ever heard of paragraphs? This is a story. Now make it one. 2/5

I'm sort of half-interested in reading the next chapter. I'm interested to see how they react to their powers and each other, but there's also something about it that irritates me... I don't know what it is. Update soon, please, and I'll try to work it out!

Ah, cool introductions.

I've only read chapter One, but I think its pretty good so far! I love greek mythology when people re-write it. We give it a sense of imagination and humor. Good job!! Looking forward to reading more. :)

`Hey YOU!

It was not lame. You portrayed all the characters and their personalities very well. I enjoyed it as much as the first chapter!

I love it! I am a mythology buff and the way you portrayed them is pure genius! I love your story, it's great so far!

1. Artemis
2. Hermes
3. Hestia
4. Athena
5. Apollo
6. Zeus
7. Poseidon
8. Hera
9. Hephaestus
10. Demeter
11. Dionysus
12. Aphrodite
13. Ares
14. Hades

Well I know one thing for certain; I love this story and I don't like Lani.^^; Anyhow... the story's good. And because I'm not completely on track - it's going on midnight now - if Hephaestus is the one with the fake leg... mmh, I think it was good.X3(But that's coming from someone who enjoys making characters lose limbs are have some form of artificial one or something...) Anyway, it's awesome... can't wait to read more.^^

This is my favorite story I have read on this site so far because it was not confusing at all! Good Job! Can you please review my story the slave's ghost? I really want someone to!

here are my guesses:
1.Artemis
2.Hermes
3.Hestia
4.Athena
5.Apollo
6.Zeus
7.Poseidon
8.Hera
9.Hephaestus
10.Demeter
11.Dionysus
13.Aphrodite
14.Ares
15.Hades

Hey great story! I really like the idea you've got going here, and the introductions so far have been good... I'm looking forward to the next part!

I have only one complaint about the whole thing... Where's Eris?! Is the good Goddess to be snubbed again?!

But then, what else would you expect an Erisian to say? :P

Etece

Yay! I get a cookie! I alway liked Artemis and Athena the best, though I don't know why . . .

I like the introductions. Diana has a secret compartment in a tree stump?? I need one of those . . .

Do you have any ideas I could use to meka a secrt compartment in a tree stump?