It's definitely easier to say something than prove something. Nice work. Have a great day.

Twilight Starr

It's your author's note that kills me, dear. :) Me too. Me too...

It sounds like the girl is asking for a second chance with you. Am I reading that right?

It's so how my life is going at the moment. We must be brain-twins. (Life-twins...?)

I love haikus. Not so spectacular about writing them, but I love 'em anyway.

And your writing is so relatable, as you already know.

My head hurts. I'm rambling. I'm just going to stop now. :)

Keep writing. Maybe the words for her'll run out. That is, if you want them too.

:)

I like this.. the whole idea of words (especially im sorrys) needing to proved is really true and relateable...

2 things though

the splitting up of too little just seemed odd... like it was only done to keep the 5-7

in the second stanza you say she used to tell you words, but in the next stanza it seems like she's still saying them

anyhow other than that it's really great

*nods head* yes, yes.