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| smilingsoprano 2008-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it . . . but although you mentioned the quotes in the summary, the format didn't separate the stanzas, so I couldn't definitively tell where the stanzas ended. You might want to put in those horizontal line things. Good job, though. A bit haunting for the politically aware. |