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| Doc Blood 2008-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseHmm. If one can't see or read about an answer, one would be more likely to turn inward to a more complex, but simpler discovery of self and relation to the all? Nice. |
| Ygg 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseSuch density in the first lines, which will be relieved by the third line. Such a simple truth, such a complex truth. Excellent work! |
| Julius Gillian 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm not sure if you're being sarcastic or serious. If I take this poem to be a serious poem then it's really talking about a person's transcendence from materialism and insatiable pleasure to something higher, and happier. On the other hand you've got this feeling of a doomed existence, and the enlightenment is just a loss of innocence. I guess I can take it both ways, but in my opinion my first guess is much more appropriate than the second. |
| Rose Valentine 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseahh, the truth is what we are currently searching for right now. nice. |