Well, I liked this! Although there could have been more Cooper/Lucy debate stuff - 'twas a little short, a mon avis. But it was written quite well, and pacy, without supremely draggy descriptions, which I really do like in a story! So, there was a reiew for you!

I was pretty scared this chapter.

I adore lil blake! he is a cute kid.!

You cannot stop posting this story. You just can't. It has to have an end, preferably a very painfull one for Cooper.

It's going well, but it seems to be moving at a very fast clip. Don't be afraid to take your time and let things unravel. Time builds tension and makes climactic moments stronger. But good work - keep going!

i like it so far, update soon

This sounds a bit like my story and I'm curious to see how it goes. Just be careful about changing tenses. I'm looking forward to more chapters!