This was very beautiful. It was so hopeful until the end with the line "as do I." It does interrupt the flow a bit, but it adds more depth, and it made me pause and think some more, so I would leave it as it is.

Excellent job!

Beautifully done.

the last line was a bit off. the whole poem was talking about the wind and then suddenly "as do I" is tacked on at the end... it feels like it should be something like "For even the wind has limitations." I don't know. maybe i'm just interpreting thing weird.

Aww it's so pretty! I like it.

The piece flows well all the way to the end. I would suggest, though, that you try a different way to set up the piece. Perhaps dividing the piece into stanzas.