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| BreatheOFfreshAIR 2008-05-13 ch 26, anon. | abuseAwsome, i think you should name it "Curable Touch", make it a characteristic of Edward ( his eyes, his body or something). If i was important ill publish this, its REALLY GOOD =D |
| Chela 2008-05-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are amazing. You're practically my hero right now. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
| S. Cherise 2008-05-12 ch 26, anon. | abuseAnd here I was thinking Rose was the devil, what with the ability to take souls- a goddess, really? That makes things that much more difficult. But I have to believe that the heaven goddess will help then, cause that's just too impossible. |
| BreatheOFfreshAIR 2008-05-11 ch 15,  | abuseomg, this story is so amazing, its 2:48 in the morning and i cant stop reading it when i have school in the morning, lol oh well, its worth it to me xD |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-11 ch 26, | abuseI like this- tis interesting. :D |
| what-is-the-truth333 2008-05-11 ch 26, | abusestrong dialogue going at all times!...yeah!... I can definately tell you want your readers to get this great plot that you have thought of...but simply throw in a couple of quick one line descriptions at least... keep going! |
| midnightbeauty 2008-05-11 ch 26, | abuseOmg... **tear** That was horrible! I knew Rose wasn't normal, but wow... I can't wait to see Josh though |
| Petals of Paranoia 2008-05-10 ch 26, | abuseWow, I totally did not see that coming! I really didn't have any notions about Rose being a goddess at all. I guess it all makes sense though. I can't wait to see Josh! |
| schplaat 2008-05-10 ch 26, | abuseWow, I would never have guessed. That explains a lot, though, and i'm annoyed with myself for not guessing it. Another great chapter, please post again soon! |
| Stahlut 2008-05-10 ch 26, | abusewow I dont know what else to say but wow. That was really amazing, I absoluteley loved it. Great chapter. |
| Missy 2008-05-10 ch 26, anon. | abuseUpdate Update Update Update PLEASE! |
| reaching-for-the-sky 2008-05-09 ch 26, | abuseWowzers! But who's she getting help from? |
| xbrunnettex0 2008-05-09 ch 26, | abuseuGHH i hate rose. shes soo evil. YEH AND WHERES GOD? or whoever rules heaven. id be like UM HI WANNA HELP ME??! |
| JustAnotherCrazyWriter 2008-05-09 ch 26, | abuseHello! I haven't reviewed in a while, SORRY! I still really love this story, don't worry! Wow, I really can't tell if you're going to make the ending happy, or sad... Hmm... *strokes chin* I mean, if you weren't going to do a sequel I'd think you're going to make it happy... but now you've got a sequel... It'd be rather pointless if they're all happy. :D I kinda thought that Rose wasn't quite a demon, but definitely not even remotely close to human either. Wouldn't have guessed that she's a Goddess though. Congrats. The SUSPENSE is killing me, UPDATE SOON! |
| SimplySweetnSour 2008-05-09 ch 26, | abusehmm. what's the sequel going to be about? having erin being reincarnated again is kinda pushing it :P |