Is this story going to end happily? If not let me know cause i dont want to read the ending =] Good story but kinda depressing

wow; this is really scary! note to self; never EVER read this story after dark.
it's so scary im like shitting myself. okay notreally. im just really freaked; but i wanna know more XXD

I really like it!

So far, I can gather this is a story about a demon who is in love with a person he was in love with many years ago; reincarnation or something along those lines. It sounds pretty chliched to me. I reckon it would be better if it was a random girl he wanted to claim, and who he loves, but would still torture and treat her like a Queen in punishment. I dunno, this "Ace" guy, besides having a completely crappy name, doesn't seem like a demon. SUre he may be dead, but he'd make a believable Casper. Y'know, the friendly ghost?

Wow, the story has gotten really intense! Looking forward to more.

great chapter (apart from the drama) please update ASAP>! Can't wait for more!

Gah! Ace is starting to annoy me. He is so... commanding...

Plus, he expects her to give up all this stuff for him, yet he barely ever answers her questions. Can you say rude?

i wouldn't be able to stand him!

~Mo~

OMG! Jared is Steven or whatever that guys name is!

~Mo~

hehe xD
I love it how Ace almost never answers her questions directly xDD

It's hilarious!

~Mo~

Hm... Well, if he is talking past tense, then don't you think it might have actually happened? Pfft, some people are so ignorant...

On to the next chapter!

~Mo~

That was an AMAZING first chapter! One of the best :)

Off I go to read the rest!

~Mo~

OH MY GOD ! The poor girl...I really hope she won't break down for good, I mean this is just...omg!
I really hope you'll post the new chapter soon, the suspanse regarding her mental health is pretty intense here :|

-really loved how you constructed the scene, kickass really-

I knew something was up with Amy!
Nothing is allowed to be normal in these situations. Not even best friends.
Lol. Poor Erin, things are looking down hill from here for her.
Poor, poor Erin.
And Amy! Now THAT'S a story I want to hear!
Lol,
Xx Alice xX

Lemme guess. He gave his soul to the devil so he became immortal to wait for her in another generation becaus eof some accident she had in her old life, and on her 17th birthday she gave her soul to him so now SHE'S immortal... Well? I'm just kinda spitballing here, so I don't know.

Um...wow. At first, when I was reading near the first paragraphs, I thought, maybe Amy's acting so weird this time because maybe it's Rose, trying to get information...but then the whole red-eyed-holy-crap-Stephen/Eric thing happened. Aw, well. I'm just trying to register why Rose is such a bitch to Erin...makes no sense, I think. Anyways, the last paragraphs were wicked...Still, great chapter!
~Donny