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lexi64111 2008-08-17 ch 30,	abuseOMG OMG OMG! i cant believe you did that! i am glad there is a sequel i would not be able to live wit the fact that he left her! i love this story! i read it in about 22 hours. Lov eit but hate that he left! ~Lexi~
AEJ325 2008-08-17 ch 1,	abuseC= I really like this! (And Edward!) Though, I've got a bff who is named Erin, so uh thats gunna be strange. Thinking of her everytime I see your character's name. Bah. Oh, well...
AJ southern 2008-08-14 ch 30,	abuseWonderfully written story.. Looking forward to sequel’s completion! : D
LovelyxXxDreams 2008-08-08 ch 30,	abuseIt was great! Really, really great! I enjoyed it so much. I'm going to check out your other stories now!
ariesgirl 2008-08-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseah! i freaked wen i found out edward was a demon. i mean, i had a feeling that he was so it wasnt total shock but still...anyways, i love this story. keep on writing!
amanda 2008-08-03 ch 21, anon.	abusechapter 21 was kind of a let down... it felt like the author got bored but wanted to update anywayz. The plot of the story is getting interesting though. its very mysterious...
Roman C Lee 2008-08-01 ch 27,	abuseI think you made him leave in a very beutiful way, and I can understand what was going on,t hough everybody will probably understand it in their own way. It was a relatively simple concept and you wrote it so WONDERFULLY! I love you even MORE now! And Joch ahem hot stuff; I can see why Edward might not have wanted this freindly boy around her; he's freakin awesome! WOOT!! LOVE him, seriously, I do! Hehe, fun guy. I wonder if he ever had to give up someone like she did in this chapter, and that's why he understood what she was going through? Oh, god, I LOVE this guy! Aww, and Edward came! Yay, there's togother again; turly together, because now she is the girl he first fell in love with as well as the girl she became in this lifetime.
Roman C Lee 2008-08-01 ch 26,	abuseAw, dude, my stomache hurts and I have a headache; so much ANGST, god I LOVe it! Hehe, I'm just masochistic/sadistic I guess, lol. YAY! I reviewed! And this chapter was so much fun! Yes, now we know what Rose is, and NOW I understand those vaugue hints you gave me about her being pure in a certain sense; that's because she's a goddess right? Or maybe I'm wrong again. I'll figure that out later. WOOT! Go Erin! I like how she pointed out to the goddess that she was feeling our 'sick' human emotion. Kill Rose, PLEASE, but I'm not so sure this is goind to end happily.
Estelin 2008-07-30 ch 30,	abusethis story was excellent. keep up the great work and writing. i can not wait to read more of your work.
ck ash 2008-07-15 ch 30, anon.	abuseThis story was excellent! I was completely hooked. There are some things I would like to comment on though. One: why was Erin barely affected at all by her parents' deaths? She reacted quite strongly to Amy's death. Of course, she loves Amy and doesn't really care for her parents, but they were torn apart and their deaths were totally gruesome and disgusting and Erin got sickened out by the blood dripping out of the vines. Strange. Two: I'm still confused about why Amy helped Steven and wouldn't let Erin leave the house. It didn't make a whole lot of sense to me. Three: It would have been nice to see a little bit more of some of the characters to get to like them better. For example, Josh. Erin barely met him and she thinks about him a lot and likes him so much. It would have been nice to see a little more of him. Steven too. There wasn't very much seen of him. The main characters were nicely shown and developed but it would be nice to see more of the other characters since they were included in the "main characters" category. I swear this story could have been a lot longer. Another is, it might have been a little cooler if Rose was a little bit harder to kill. But it worked nicely this way. Some minor details: You kept switching from past tense to present tense and back again throughout the whole story. It would run more smoothly if that were edited. There are not a whole lot of mistakes but there are a few grammatical errors that could be fixed by editing again. (As if you have the time with all the stories you write! --I'm definitely going to be reading those too :D) By the way, it's "eaves dropping" not "ease dropping". Please don't take any of this as insulting, I'm just throwing my two cents at you. I thought it was excellently done. Although it was sad, I liked the ending. It wasn't the classic "happily ever after, it all turns out fine in the end" kind of thing. I like it when someone has the guts to give it a not so happy ending. Kudos to you. I also liked how the songs inspired you and that you included the lyrics in your story. Well, that about sums it up. I just wanted to voice my appreciation for the story and the hard work (Writing long stories is a LOT of work). You've got quite a talent. Keep it up. ck
Enchanted Rose 2008-07-09 ch 30,	abuseWhat a sad ending! I'm glad there's a sequel! Poor poor Erin and Edward too, leaving her must have been the hardest thing he's ever had to do. I REALLY REALLY enjoyed this story though! :)
Enchanted Rose 2008-07-09 ch 29,	abuseYay, Rose is finally dead! Serves that bitch right!
Enchanted Rose 2008-07-09 ch 28,	abuseAmy died! That's so sad! I was wondering if she would, like if Erin would get to keep Eric and loose Amy. I really can't wait to see Rose get what she deserves!
Enchanted Rose 2008-07-09 ch 27,	abuseIf a kiss was all it took to free Steven's soul, she should have done that sooner. lol! I want to find out how the story ends but I'm also sad that it's going to end. I'm glad there's a sequel though! :)
Enchanted Rose 2008-07-09 ch 26,	abuseWhen Erin said that she thought gods and goddesses envy humans it reminded me of this line in the movie Troy where Archilles told Bryces he thought gods and goddesses envy humans because they can die and life seems more precious because any moment can be your last. Erin should have watched the movie and tossed that in Rose's face. lol! Or maybe the fact that Edward loves her and only loves her and will forever love only her. Rose wants to kill her so not like she can get anymore pissed at her. lol!

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