Bravo this was an excellent story and I enjoyed reading every moment of it. There was the occasional typo, no biggie but my main advice would be to clarify what the projection was in the beginning. I found it a little confusing. Also I would have loved to know more about the rest of the kids in the house, like the new girl (I can't remember her name right now) but you acted like there was going to be something special about her but we never saw it. Or Hunter, I think, you mentioned something about him having an awful background but you never told us what it was. It'd be great to know some of those things, I think it'd really help with the bond between the readers and the witches. This isn't really advice but more like a question, so will Linden live for a thousand years where Riley will only live till she's eighty. How's that going to work out? Also it'd be great to know more about the witches and how that works. I don't know much about Elementals or Witches so it'd be great if you gave more background in your story. But anyway I really loved it and your action was amazing, the plot was addicting! Can't wait to read the sequel and any other stories you have written!

Ba dum! And the plot thickens! Sort of, I can't wait to learn more about mystery guy. This story is great so far, you're writing is captivating. You have a perfect blend of action/dialogue and description.

Fantastic story. Great concept. I loved it. :)

Did you get the name Alesana from the band?

I love this story but this should have been rated T instead of M.

Hhm. I kind of didn't like her going after him like that. It seems a bit needy of her. Doesn't take away form the story though... its still awesome ;)

I'm really enjoying this story. It's very refreshing to find something original in the supernatural/romance genre. I think you have a great talent and I would say more but I really want to move on to the next chapter...Anyway good job :D

Wow wow wow

I started reading this story just yesterday and I just finished it a moment ago. Unbelievably the most original story I have ever read. I loved it! You're an extremely talented writer. I read somewhere that this was your side project. Lol it's awesome for a side project. Anyway keep writing. I can't wait to read more.

Amazing story, you should get published this thing could be bigger then twilight xD Love it

whew finally finished it and it was great! loved the end and i am now eager to move on to the sequeal

haha i can't believe she actually hide in his trunk that's like... wow

o that dream was pretty creepy
oh! and i bet i know why omar's sad

wow so rain can be a negative side effect of getting more mature powers or something? like when she turns 18 she gets all her powers and stuff? m intresting

OMG what an awesome story! I stayed up until 2am, when I had to be at Uni at 8am. Absolutely loved the storyline and the characters!

This story was AMAZING!! I stayed up all night last night and read the whole thing through in one shot. I just couldn't stop reading it. You are such a good writer and I am so excited for the sequel.