for a little amount of words.. that was verygood. it had me thinking about a lot of different aspects..

This poem was great!

Italisizing the words and underlining them is a great way of emphasizing on the words.

You made very good word choices in this poem which is why it's so powerful.Short but powerful! Very nice!

Good. Eloquent and striking, sortof in the way a good haiku is. The emphasis works well, and none of the words were over-angsty. There really is a sense of empowerment in this one.

i think it can be interpreted in a lot of different ways which is always the best in poetry