 king of confidence 2008-05-17 . chapter 1So sweet! I had an idea of what the plot twist would be from the "open mind" requirement, but I still enjoyed the way you did it. There's a few typos here and there ("We had never disgusted genders.") but it's not that bad--the way the concept and the ending are handled override the minor errors, in my opinion. I'll recommend this to others! :) |
 Kat The Great 2008-03-09 . chapter 1 That was really really good. I smile at your story. : ) |
 Sameisauce 2008-03-08 . chapter 1I liked the idea,and it was well written. |
 Black Viper 2008-03-02 . chapter 1LOVE THIS! SO CUTE! |
 Avaitor 2008-02-29 . chapter 1Awhah. It was adorable. I liked that it was, like, realistic. Because I think it's sweet when people have conversations over desks. But that story was a lot sweeter. |
 Artemis Anderson 2008-02-29 . chapter 1This was cute |
 Princess Sin 2008-02-29 . chapter 1O.M.G... THAT WAS THE GREATEST STORY IN THE WORLD! dON'T WORRY! YOU WILL BE GETTING HUNDREDS AND HUNDREDS OF REVEIWS WITH THIS KIND OF WRITING! iT'S LIKE THE BEST STORY EVA! YOUR IN LUCK 2! tIS IS THE FORST REVIEW THAT I DIDN'T TALK ABOUT WHERE MY STORY IS AND BLAH BLAH BLAH!! OH! whoops i guess i just did. Don't mind the penname!!1
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