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| i.am.pockets 2008-03-05 ch 1,  | abusethings'll get better. he loves you. as a poem, i liked it. rhyming, of course, is always good in my book. good job. ((hope things get better)) |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseOk is he like totally ignoring the fact that your alive when he has a gf? If so thats no excuse, he's being a jerk. For you I hope it doesn't happen again. Best of luck! XKristie MarieX |
| briannanicole768 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad but such a great poem at the same time. Keep up the good work! :) *Bri |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseAww, this is so sad. I hope things work out and get better. Have a great day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| undescribableMONiiCA. 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseAww I almost cried when I found out the poem was about your brother. It was very beautiful. One day love won't get in the way f your brother...not if you feel the way it comes off in this poem about him. I think one of the lines that touched me most was: "Today I half dialed your number," |
| Dreaming Chica 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI love that last line, it truely ties everything together. This whole poem was very touching and well written! Hope things work out for you! ♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseAww Sweets this is so ...I want to say cute, but that suggests happy, which it is not. It's ...amazing. It gets everything across. Great. -stix- |
| simpleplan13 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseI like the title because that's what it is... the history... I also love the ending the fay 1, 2 and 3... nice job |
| maximusrexmundi 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuse:( hang on baby... you wont lose your brother a second time. Not even the most cold-hearted person in the world would do that. |
| xxopticaldelusions 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abusei love the way you kept it rhyming faithfully all the way through! whenever i try, I can only manage a few lines. (And i didn't mean for that to rhyme). anyway, great job! |
| melbell 2008-02-29 ch 1, | abuseah, i see. i like the repeating part. good job, sir. sir. haha. |