Do you mind if I do a fanart for this and post it on an art site? I'll give you a copy and only post with your approval, but I have the perfect scene for this!

You really have a way with words. As I was reading this I was actually shaking, hearing the music and seeing everything.

I don't normally read poetry as they often don't interest me, but I have to say, this one was incredible. The imagery and the style was fantastic. Your poems remimd me of the truly fantastic poems I read in my anthology at school. You're one of the best authors (of prose and poetry) I've ever seen.

Wow. Very, very nice. This is one of those tough times when I can't really find the words to praise this.
What I liked most about this piece was the use of referring back to rhyme in the last line of each verse. That really gave it a nice flow. Creepy, too, since you cleverly inferred what was going on; not once did you actually say it was a dead bride, but that's what I could picture.

You've got talent there, my friend.

-KKBS

This is beautiful.
This is amazingly beautiful.

"You live, my love, with life you glow!
While the music keeps its flow"

Such a fascinating, completely original subject.
I'm raving about this now. haha.

Wow I usually don't review poetry but I wanted to comment on this. It has a good flow and the rhyming is natural, which is really hard to find. Anyway I'm really glad you reviewed my story, otherwise I would never have found this! ;)

Very disturbing and oddly romantic, I absolutely loved it. You make the reader feel the horror of the poem very well and paint a very dark, gothic image. Definitely going on my favourites. Thanks for the review on 'Numbers' by the way.

Firstly, the rhyming here is exquisite. Secondly, the whole concept is so beautiful, and it is extremely well written. Good job.

This is a wonderful poem. I love it! You have a real talent. Nicely done.

...whoa...
This is great. I love the imagery here, the symbolism... It's really great.

;)
~Katrina

Beautiful poem. One of the best I've read in a long time.

this is so original, that fact alone makes it great! I love the form and style, and the creepy/romantic feel it has. Beautiful.

the moroseness of this piece reminds me of the prose and ingenuity of Poe's work; very fluid and rhythmically beautiful. a pleasure to read.

Wow. Creepy, but very interesting. It's got a really nice flow and rythim to it.

'you look on me with tattered eyes' - love it!
gracefully haunting. fabulous, extremely impressed!