Very interesting story so far. I enjoy the pacing very much. You let the readers know just enough about the plot and the characters to keep us interested without letting us know too much and be able to guess the plot twists. I already have a few theories about what is going on and I'm curious as to how close (or far off) I am from the actual storyline.
This story is also one of the very few I've read on fictionpress that isn't riddled with spelling and grammar errors. This definately adds to my enjoyment of the story.

I noticed you haven't updated in over a year but I hope that you add more to this story.

OMG! He Raped Him! I Love This Story! The Plots Uber Great! You Should Update Son!

Aw this story is so cute! If I was Cole I would so get revenge on that gardener. haha.

Well I guess this is pretty good. But publish material? Nah sorry. It doesn't stand out to me and the writing, eh it's alright. I think you should get a better idea/storyline, expand your vocabulary or go to school or whatever because honestly I don't think you'll get good money out of this. I know "it's not about the money". Psh, yeah. It's kind of hard to get into it for me because I'm straight as a brand new ruler thus man on man nah, can't picture it for me. Oh well good job, and if you're really serious then don't give up. Just don't be a dumbass about writing, I can't see someone with published writing posting it on the internet, but hey the web is so big and future generations are so lazy, why not?

Thanks for the suggestion I liked this alot! It's cute. And the employer is really creepy. But I like his son. And I'm curious to know what Cole wants to do with the picture.

Oh wait you have another chapter up! I didn't even notice. *is dumb*

Ooh, a date-rape drug?! I'm just guessing, but that's what it seemed like. xD

Anyway, nice story.

This is really interesting so far! I really like the plot, and your writing is very nice. =]
Can't wait to read more!

Oh, good so far. Really interesting. I like it. :)

More soon?