*smiles*

I absolutely LOVED this story! :D Fantastic job, absolutely fantastic. Not only shall I officially be adding this to my favorites list, I shall be handing the link over to a friend of mine. I'm sure she'll love it as much as I do. :D

too cute!

Wow. I read this all the way through and it took some time to do! You did a wonderful job on this story--barely any grammatical mistakes, great storyline, and really believable characterizations. This is just as good (if not better) than some of the books I buy in stores, and it's obvious you put a lot of work into it. Congratulations!

i love the story, especially the depth of your characters, you should have it published if you haven't already, it just the kind of story i wouldn't mind buying is it were on a shelf.

you have to know you are epically awesome. this is a must read for everyone, it was adorable, and reminded me of a trashy romance novel, which is perfect. it was light hearted even while it was dramatic, and i'm glad i found it. keep writing!! i'd love to see you published some day.

well i had intended to only say this makes me feel like i'm reading a 'smarmy romance novel' but then adam showed up! ahh!! must keep reading!!

Well, it could just be how good Pat looks in his jeans.. (he he) but I hear George Straits - Lets Fall to Pieces Together in my mind at the end of this chapter ;)

Dude.. ok... so .. I told myself I would close this thing and go to bed once I finished chapter 4. ... and then the last few paragraphs shot that all to hell. hahaha curse you... its nearly 1 am. ;) I'm sucked in!!

I love this story! Seriously, its really good! I haven't picked up many mistakes, just typos, but we all have a few of those! Once again, this is great so far, you had me from the begining.

Yay! Sweet and fluffy :D

Send this to a publisher, honey.

Now.

I want a copy on my bookshelf I can read over and over again.


This was the best thing I've read for a very, very long time.

amazing! your story def. lifted my spirits :)Thanks!

Excellent story from beginning to end. Your writing is superb! My friend jenniesmith recommended your story and I'm glad that she did. Look forward to reading more of your works.

Wow... this story is so amazing. I was hooked from the very beginning not only by the story but by your writing. So often the good writers slip through the cracks but I am so very happy that you have not. Your writing is amazing and I do hope that you will continue this story. Your characters are so well developed that I feel they are part of my everyday circle of friends. I can't say enough. Keep up the superb work!!

xoxo
jennie

That was... PERFECTION!

I loved every bit of it!

xoxo
jennie