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| Lily Jane 2008-03-01 ch 1, | Simple and accurate description of my day. Doesn't have to be complicated to get my empathy. :) Maybe what it drove her to the edge of would be a nice addition. The subject seemed to stable and bored till the end. |
| In the Rye 2008-02-29 ch 1, | quite venomous. |