Nice, lol. I like the A,A,B,B,A,A,B part the best. That is really cool.

I like how you kept on the repitition of the word crushed.

I really enjoyed reading this... haha, I think everyone knows how it feels to flunk out on a test... ugh, so horrible.

Keep up the good work.

Alexandria Smith

ha ha ha ha this reminds me of my own school life. But me and my friends have our own opinion of failing (anything below a 95). Yes I'm phsyco, but that's no reason for me not to review. I liked this poem.