Reviews for Promise and Poison

xbluxmoonx 2008-05-14 ch 1,	abuseeh ^_^ why haven't i read this yet?? lol i loves it. =] your characters always draw you in one way or the other. and i loved this ending. anyway, off to read the next chap.
VesperK 2008-03-30 ch 2,	abuseNow this DOES sound interesting! She is a bit annoying, but you could put that down to being quite naive, but she could grow out of it, she has quite a bit of promise.
Kildiazar the Unwanted Ghos... 2008-03-15 ch 2,	abuseSameal slipped his hands out of the manacles and stood on the bed. “Abracadabra!” he said in bewilderment, “that was your magic word?” Annoyed, Elizabeth jumped up off the sofa. “Well I couldn’t think of that many magical words and…and I’ve read that you should always go with the obvious because the obvious is so unobvious that no one would ever think if it.” Man, that was so ridiculous, it was priceless!! ROFL!! Anyway, even though they don't sound like beings that are hundreds or thousands of years old, at least they've got attitude. And I like it. Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!
Written 2008-03-04 ch 1,	abusewow, very interesting! a few lines made me wonder if you forgot to capitalize your words? like this one: She looked up and tiled her head to the side, “my name’s Elizabeth,” she held out a hand. the 'my' seems like the beginning of a sentence... so... yeah I dno :D anyway, interesting story, and I hope to read more!