A much more straight forward poem from the others, but this is good for it shows me a diferent side of you. Great work.

Maggot

Too, too lovely. It was so raw and real. Natural. Your words conveyed the meaning briskly and without all the excess. I felt what you felt, I was broken and bleeding (reading this). Then alive and with God. Amazing, I really enjoyed this.

Wow, now this is a sexy poem.

I really love it.
Keep up the awsome work!