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| righthere431 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abusehaha i love jean =] and go laura for doing something daring =] and she got something good out of it too woot woot! lol |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-08 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, and well-written. A pretty creative idea with interesting characters. (: I was just wondering an approximate age for Mark? Under 30 could mean a lot of things. :P I have to say I'm a bit bothered by relationships with over 10 year gaps, heh. So I was just wondering. Other than that, this was a cute oneshot and a cute addition to our c2 from artistic dreamer. |
| panemonia 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. It is funny in a way, it makes me want to laugh i have no idea why. nice writing style you have. but i'll never do it even if you gave me 40 dollars. Laura is somewhat brave XD |
| pretentious fXXX 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abusei love ur story...i wish i was able to carry out a dare like that...and i love L.M. Montgomery and i love that u put her in ur story... |
| found.eventually 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseHaha! You make me feel like I should run around kissing strangers on busses! XP So adorable! I like the fact that she's suddenly taking chances, but maybe it would've been better if you added parts of their conversations in, you know? Show a little bit of spark? XP But then again that's just my opinion. I still loved it! |
| x3life 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseaw this was so cutee =) |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abusehaha, adorable :P -Aria |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! I just loved it. So sweet & natural. You write beautifully. |
| mia5081 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was really cute, and I liked how Laura got off the bus with Jean rather than the old cliche of riding off into the sunset with Mark the hottie lol (I would love a guy like that). The only thing I was a little confused about was that in your freshmen year of college a person is usually 18, while Laura was 17. Did she skip a grade, or did you mean to write college? Loved it :D ~Mia |
| SparklingStar25 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cute!Will there be a sequel? |
| Gin Blossom 2008-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery cute; I like the power trip the main character gets. It's nice to see a confident female character who isn't a ** or a **. |