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| shadows of a trackless sea 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abusethis is sad, but if it's about him dear i must say, just let it go. i knjow how it feels to miss a person like him but take a look at what he is what he's become and you'll see its better off this way. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abusegreat piece. it's very real. Faith |
| A Healing Heart 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseGood work. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abusecan’t you remember caring for each other/we were all alone?.. I didnt like that line because shouldn't you have cared for each other all the time? Other than that I liked it a lot... making a physical image of the barrier during the fight was great, but what I really loved was the last two lines.. especially that last one.. beautiful |