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shadows of a trackless sea
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abusethis is sad, but if it's about him dear i must say, just let it go. i knjow how it feels to miss a person like him but take a look at what he is what he's become and you'll see its better off this way.
Faith Adeline
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abusegreat piece. it's very real.
Faith
A Healing Heart
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuseGood work.
simpleplan13
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abusecan’t you remember caring for each other/we were all alone?.. I didnt like that line because shouldn't you have cared for each other all the time?

Other than that I liked it a lot... making a physical image of the barrier during the fight was great, but what I really loved was the last two lines.. especially that last one.. beautiful
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