this is sad, but if it's about him dear i must say, just let it go. i knjow how it feels to miss a person like him but take a look at what he is what he's become and you'll see its better off this way.

great piece. it's very real.

Faith

Good work.

can’t you remember caring for each other/we were all alone?.. I didnt like that line because shouldn't you have cared for each other all the time?

Other than that I liked it a lot... making a physical image of the barrier during the fight was great, but what I really loved was the last two lines.. especially that last one.. beautiful