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| ??? 2008-04-18 ch 4, anon. | abusedetail is good unfotunatly it is too short for a book. Even if you put all books in the series in one, ALL IN ALL GREAT for an action adventure/sci-fi! |
| Anonymous 2008-04-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseMeh, it's not bad. Your writing doesn't really suit my tastes, but it's got some potential. |