Awesome tale, very well written, no flaws that I could see. One for the favorites for sure.

Spawny

WOW!

I loved it. It was amazing, I can't think of a single bit of criticism. It was incredible!

wow! what an awesome write. I love the way the narrator talks to the children, and us. awesome story teller's point of view! I really liked that. the story itself is gorgeous. a little trippy, but very cool. and the end is cute, where she's talking about what kind of food she would like.

all in all, I was impressed!

That is such a great story. if you ever have anymore dreams like that PLEASE post them on here!

This is the best story I've read on fictionpress in a LONG time. Keep up the good work. It was creative. If your school has a creative writting magazine submit it. 5 stars.