|Reviews for Dove|
| Genesis Rose 9/25/09 . chapter 1
If you still use fictionpress, I'd love to see more of your writing.
I think you are brilliant, and have a great mind.
About this poem... it was great. Your format is very interesting to read and look at, but I personally wanted more out of the poem itself and I thought it left something to be desired.
Hope to see you back soon.
| UncontainedPoison 3/24/08 . chapter 1
I could feel the emotions running rapidly around this majestic poetry. I love the style you use, while writing. Your doing marvelous!
| Spirit Tigress 3/23/08 . chapter 1
I feel like that everyday, and it was well written.
| Scarlett Wynter 3/1/08 . chapter 1
Great job. I like your style, it's succinct and flows really nicely.
| 97thparis 3/1/08 . chapter 1
This is full of emotion. great job ;)
| Burnt Bread 3/1/08 . chapter 1
The idea of a dove brings softness to the piece, contrasting the beginning and the end, and in a clever way provides closure to the piece. Well done.
Your style of poetry isn't for everyone, but I'm getting use to it and loving the use of language - it's so succinct. The way your poetry flows facilitates truth without frills, everything seems raw (so raw in fact that it might still be hopping about and eating grass).
| felicia13 3/1/08 . chapter 1
Wow. Fragile, huh? Very tender, very soft. Somehow, poetry ends up looking like its subject. And you've captured that here.
The last stanza is great. "Wrap me in her warmth so I don't break." We all need that sometimes, don't we?
I wasn't sure where this was going at the beginning, but I'm very glad it ended up here. It's lovely, darling. May I ask what inspired this?