Joey and Adam are cute, but I really don't care for Joey's siblings. How could they even smile at him and say those kinds of things?

I cant believe I never read this story! It was so cute and made me smile! Good job )

I cant believe I never read this story! It was so cute and made me smile! Good job )

I Loved This Story!

i love the concept of the story and the story itself, i just found the pov's confusing because they seemed to change from joey, then to adam and sometimes to a narrator telling the story. but i like the story

Such a love story - but I think Adam should have punched Joey's brother - oh well sorry I come from hot blooded people - lol

this was very good. i only wish it were longer. and i wanted to know how his parents were killed

hey! loved the story; it was too cute. ]

as for a bit of constructive criticism, id like to point out that in the beginning, many of your sentences have the same structure.

eg: "walking over, joey..."

"walking into the kitchen, joey..."

"walking out..., joey..."

"finding the fuse box..., joey..."

i just wanted to point that out. if you feel changing it is unnecessary, thats fine with me. im not a professional. just thought id put in my 2 cents. :)

i loved it!

nice this was very well writen and i thank you for sharing it also the things at the end they do happen in real life and i love that you write about it

For some weird, absurd reason...I was actually rooting for Joey to go through therapy...I just probably would have liked to see more drama lmao.

(I'm a complex entity (yes human being cannot describe me)

Well, I'm off to read your CRDP series.

Hey this story was great! One thing though, when it says "Mumbling to himself as he poured a cop" I think you mean "Mumbling to himself as he poured a cup".

I really enjoyed this!

i am so in love with you!..seriously !..every time you write a story i just fell in love with the character and the story that i just feel that im walking into a paradise..you are just that GOOD!..you do great story, the plot are not boring, the characters are super duper hot and you are one of the few writer in here that i truly truly like and love reading the stories!..and this one will be be added to one of my favorite story list!

that was great!

maybe a sequel!

you made me cry, do you have any idea how rare that is? of course you dont, but that was a complement.